Clouds tell me not to go, storm are coming your way
People telling me to stop if you want to see another day
My dog gives me a strange look, saying there's danger ahead master
She told she looked at the sun in the sky and smelt a disaster
I took a breath and stepped forward for a journey I may never return
There may be people around my photo to take a sad mourn
I must clear my mind and move, but for that I may die
But I can't live like this, every day with cries
If I dare, I may die, if I don't I'll sure
I finally move forward, seeking my life and its cure
They make my grave ready and I take my first step
They told me to wait brother; you're making a big mistake
I can't live like this anymore, it hurts me everyday
Listening myself called a looser and all the things they say
So, I dare to take myself far, a place far, far away
For I want to make a change and find a new way
I went to a strange place, and at first it seemed all wrong
Down I went in my knees, let the tears come
I looked here and there to see myself very far
It won't come that easy; I've got to cross my own bars
I take a long breath and wait and see
The stars conspiring against me
But walk I must and fight till end
Coz that is what life really means
I could sit in sofa set, and think myself a prince
But I dared to move forward to another thrill
They said me I would die first day, look I'm still alive
Fighting, struggling through these winds, all those doubts in mind
So here I am standing strong against the storm and clouds
Though you tried to make me fall, I ain't going down
It all started with crazy thought to make a stride in life
I made it all correct now, thanks to god, I'd not been sigh
I've got to move still far, forget the comforts and coats
Got to go where I belong before my body rots
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Some wonderful lines.... simple words... and a superve flow... loved it(as always)...
UDESH
I didn't knowu write so wonderful poems,
Niraj
Great poem, birth of a new William Shakespeare
Mahendra
Fantastic dude.........thumbs up......
I didn't knew there was a great poet inside my bro!!!.......simply awesomee!!!! :D -Kundan
U r really gonna go very ahead................
Nimesh
So Mr. Blogger, which is difficult to write poems or articles???
loved it......
beautiful lines..,,
i truely n truely liked it.....
Yeah, didn't think about it yar...........
Rocking bro...................................
Robert Hooke haha
dammmmmmmmmmmmiii man ....rally nice
i think u hav done a gr8 job man
Really nice samrat! luvd it!
Gud job bro!
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