Thursday, August 11, 2011

Before my body rots


Clouds tell me not to go, storm are coming your way
People telling me to stop if you want to see another day
My dog gives me a strange look, saying there's danger ahead master
She told she looked at the sun in the sky and smelt a disaster

I took a breath and stepped forward for a journey I may never return
There may be people around my photo to take a sad mourn
I must clear my mind and move, but for that I may die
But I can't live like this, every day with cries

If I dare, I may die, if I don't I'll sure
I finally move forward, seeking my life and its cure
They make my grave ready and I take my first step
They told me to wait brother; you're making a big mistake

I can't live like this anymore, it hurts me everyday
Listening myself called a looser and all the things they say
So, I dare to take myself far, a place far, far away
For I want to make a change and find a new way

I went to a strange place, and at first it seemed all wrong
Down I went in my knees, let the tears come
I looked here and there to see myself very far
It won't come that easy; I've got to cross my own bars

I take a long breath and wait and see
The stars conspiring against me
But walk I must and fight till end
Coz that is what life really means

I could sit in sofa set, and think myself a prince
But I dared to move forward to another thrill
They said me I would die first day, look I'm still alive
Fighting, struggling through these winds, all those doubts in mind

So here I am standing strong against the storm and clouds
Though you tried to make me fall, I ain't going down
It all started with crazy thought to make a stride in life
I made it all correct now, thanks to god, I'd not been sigh

I've got to move still far, forget the comforts and coats
Got to go where I belong before my body rots

16 comments:

Samrat Babu Koirala said...

Guys, post the comment.
just click on comments,
and just below the comment box,
there is comment as option,
select anonymous if you dont have other id and then, write comment and dont forget to write your name at last.......

Anonymous said...

Some wonderful lines.... simple words... and a superve flow... loved it(as always)...

UDESH

Anonymous said...

I didn't knowu write so wonderful poems,
Niraj

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Anonymous said...

Great poem, birth of a new William Shakespeare
Mahendra

Sudipt Panta said...

Fantastic dude.........thumbs up......

Anonymous said...

I didn't knew there was a great poet inside my bro!!!.......simply awesomee!!!! :D -Kundan

Anonymous said...

U r really gonna go very ahead................
Nimesh

Anonymous said...

So Mr. Blogger, which is difficult to write poems or articles???

Anonymous said...

loved it......
beautiful lines..,,
i truely n truely liked it.....

Samrat Babu Koirala said...

Yeah, didn't think about it yar...........

Anonymous said...

Rocking bro...................................

Robert Hooke haha

Anonymous said...

dammmmmmmmmmmmiii man ....rally nice

Anonymous said...

i think u hav done a gr8 job man

Anonymous said...

Really nice samrat! luvd it!

Computer artist said...

Gud job bro!

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